Recently bully children has become a hot topic again, this problem is never out of news. This situation usually appears in school, the strong, tall boys are always bully the weak one. However, now some girls seems had joined in the bully team. It’s reported a 12 year old girl who beat a 1 year old boy badly in the elevator, and throw him down from 25th floor. I believe it’s high time to avoid this bully situation.

最近惡霸孩童又成為了熱點，這個問題永遠都不會淡出新聞界。這種情形通常發(fā)生在校園里，強壯高大的男生常常欺凌弱小的。然而，現(xiàn)在有些女生似乎也加入了暴力隊伍。有報道說一個12歲的女孩在電梯里暴打一個1歲的男孩，然后把他從25樓丟下去。我相信現(xiàn)在是時候避免這種暴力情況了。

I think there are two important affection lead to children’s behavior. The first one is the education from parents. As we all know, parents are the first and most affective teacher for children. Since children are every good at copying, parents’ manners will directly copied by children. Therefore, parents should not quarrel or fight in front of children, and spend more energy to teach children how to love others. Especially for a single parent family.

我認為影響孩子行為有兩個重要的因素。第一就是父母的教育。我們都知道父母是孩子第一位也是最具影響力的老師。孩子們會直接模仿父母的行為舉止，因為孩子都善于模仿。因此，父母不該在孩子面前吵架或者大家，而是花更多精力教導孩子如何去關愛他人。特別是單親家庭里。

Second, the children’s second teacher is the teacher from school. If teacher didn’t stop the violence as soon as possible, the school will become a cradle of violence. Teacher should not only teach student the knowledge from books, but also teach them how to behavior well. Moreover, children spend more time at school than at home, hence, teacher should take the responsibility to keep them out of violence.

第二，孩子的第二位老師就是學校的老師。如果老師沒有盡可能快遞制止暴力，那么學校就會成為暴力的搖籃。老師不應該只教課本上的知識，同時也該教他們?nèi)绾窝?guī)蹈矩。再者，孩子待在學校的時間比待在家里久，因此老師該擔負起讓孩子遠離暴力的重任。

To sum up, children become a good one or bad one is due to the guidance from parents and teachers. The best way to avoid children become violent is teach them behavior well and supervise them.

中而言之，孩子是好是壞取決于父母和老師的引導。防止孩子變得暴力的最好方法是教育他們循規(guī)蹈矩和監(jiān)督他們。

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